Thursday, April 2, 2026

 Above the rooftops,

behind night's cloudy blackness  -

      the stars still shine - no?

 

Not sure if "rooftops" is a little to trite, "Above the houses"?

And "the stars are shining" for a little more confident/optimistic last line?

Or, "full moon of Easter"? (there is always a full moon during Holy Week!) 

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 Above the rooftops, behind night's cloudy blackness  -       the stars still shine - no?   Not sure if "rooftops" is a little...