Monday, July 28, 2025

 Like an F-15

 the dragon-fly maneuvers,

    patrolling the pond. 

 

               Or

 

Glides, banks, dives, sweeps, turns -

the F-15 dragon-fly

    patrols over pond. 

 

I like the action words in the second one. 

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