Over snow smooth fields

pink sky over bare branches -

    Night falls, moon rises.

 

A little unsure about two "over's" in two lines.  The first carries more the meaning of "beyond" and the second "above".  "Beyond...fields"..... "above bare branches"?  I don't know - I guess I liked the two "over's", even if they have slightly different meanings.  And hey - it's my haiku, I'll do over and over if I want to!  And no, we did not actually see the moon rise.  Would have been really dramatic, and I think it just makes a nice line.  We were driving home from southern Wisconsin, just south of Green Bay.