Saturday, February 1, 2025

 Like honey on toast, 

Maple syrup on pancakes -

     Sunlight on Thursday.


I love it - I was really struggling with that last line.  

"Sunlight on the yard"?  -  too clunky

"Sunlight on the meadow"? - but it wasn't a meadow I was seeing, it was the back yard, and the park across the road.

Then I was lying in bed last night thinking "When was that, anyway?" - and it was "on Thursday"!  I love the jump from the physical to the temporal. 

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